Personal Thoughts, Thoughts recollected in Tranquility

Invincible

If you try to catch me

I’ll stain your hands

and slip through

the holes in your hands

and escape forever

leaving a fragrance behind

For I’m invincible

And if I stay for long

I may suffocate you

because I’m intense

And purely toxic

I am smoke…..

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Β© The Rendezvous Club

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69 thoughts on “Invincible”

  1. This is a great poem because

    At first I felt nothing bad and enjoyed the poem, until the line “leaving a fragrance behind”
    But after that.. especially “i will suffocate you”, the poem became scary. I love this poem bcoz it starts normally and ends scary. Amazing!! This is what a great piece of writing is -“playing with the mood, emotions of readers.. and that’s a great talent. πŸ‘

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